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Did I mention that I like Tracks? :) Did I mention that I love pitting him against Starscream?
He's practicing his own version of jet judo!!!
Oh, here's the rough pencil version: [link]

This pic is the longest I spent on any single piece of fanart ever, and I'm not done yet. still fiddling. I'm not sure what to do with his car form. I feel like there should be an in-between shot of him transforming, but I'm too lazy/tired to find it and draw and color again...agggh! Conversely, I'm thinking of erasing his car form and putting Skywarp in there, to preserve the trine formation as well as the composition. Keeping his car form there doesn't make much narrative sense either, since I removed the action lines from the original sketch. What do you think?

Thundercracker was originally supposed to be straffing Tracks until I realized he'd have to be aiming at Starscream as well...and I don't think TC's that stupid.

Critiques and suggestions welcome! Should he be firing the Tracks gun? I didn't know how to work it in anymore.

I'll get to it in a few...weeks. I just had to upload this pic because otherwise it will haunt me and I won;'t be able to work on anything else. Agh, cartoon robot crush!!!
Cheap and dirty lightning backgrounds heheh.
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